Project Journal Week 28

During the easter break the team outlined a plan to rewrite the final team report. After showing it during the last week of term to Amanda and Claire, they highlighted many areas that needed adjusting. The plan was to rewrite the team dissenation with each member of the team heading thier own previous section and additional ones. For me this meant a complete rewrite of the Implementatin section. Additionally to this I was also given the task of writing an Objectives section and also the Abstract.



At the start of this week each member of the team presented thier work and adjustments were made accordingly. The team felt that the Abstract that I had wrote needed to be more succinct and also have a better introduction, so Nick adjusted these elements. Additionally to this, both the Implementation section as well as the Objectives section were adjusted as the team felt they were also quite wordy. The Objectives section that i had wrote was cut out all together as the team were worried about the word limit, so the objective points were planted straight in.



The team presented a brieft summary of this work to Amanda who suggested that we email her the most important sections of report. The plan now is to begin the writeup of the individual reports until Amanda and Claire read the sections that we emailed them.